28th of Dec '15 @ 1:53 AM
<Thanks! I'm glad you like it. ^D^ I think you're doing good so far.
You may want to try to make your plays about a line longer though (about 2 lines while typing, if your box is about the same size as mine); I think this one may have been just a little short of 500 characters...
As the extra pointy Traptur came across the view, the pinata's head slowly turned, tracking the Traptur's path with its flat eyes as the rest of its body remained unmoving.
This new creature was quite curious... Such an opportunity was not for wasting.
Suddenly, the pinata's back left hip dropped a notch, a small explosion of streamers and confetti bursting forth from it as it did so. The front right paw flexed stiffly with another burst of confetti. Then the back right, and the front left elbow extended, and the back left paw extended, each with a burst of streamers and confetti from every joint. The tail swooshed downward and back, then up again behind, sending forth red and sand party particles at every bend. There was a slight pause as confetti drifted downward and faded into sparkles.
And then a snap as the rope disconnected and the Ridix fell to the ground, another release of confetti bursting out over the ground around its paws from the abrupt jarring.
Another dramatic pause and then the Ridix began to approach the Traptur, it's movements choppy like a ticking clockwork thing, every movement accented with bursts of confetti and streamers.
<Any reaction, @Anger
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